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You write something down and it’s awkward, trivial, artificial, approximate. But with effort . . . you can get it to open up, and expose what’s lurking there beyond the clumsy thing you first put down.

—Deborah Eisenberg

“What makes a story compelling?” asks instructor Andy Touhy. “More importantly, what are the ways to make it compelling? In this online workshop, we’ll begin to really think about how fictional narrative (short story or novel) is constructed, and made better.

"Opening lines matter, as does point of view choice, as does the gap between what a character wants and what a character gets (the conflict that creates plot), as does engaging dialogue, and artful prose style, and images that fire the imagination. We’ll explore several basic elements of craft—with an eye toward creating a visceral experience that sticks with readers long after the reading.”

Though the class may mix in short readings for discussion and writing exercises, workshopping (the sharing and critique of participant work) will be the primary focus. All writers will have two opportunities to show pieces to the group. These may be short stories or flash fiction or novel chapters or excerpts. Maximum word count per submission is 3,000.

“We’ll grow as readers and listeners,” says Andy, “by approaching one another’s work as if it were our own, testing choices and material, and identifying strengths and weaknesses, so that the best of our writing selves make the page.” Andy will also give generous written feedback to each participant.

*To ensure both an intimate classroom environment and that each student receives ample workshopping time, enrollment for this course is capped at nine participants.


About The Writing Salon's Remote Classes

Due to concerns about the spread of COVID-19, The Writing Salon is running all classes in a remote learning format. You will be able to participate in live class meetings via Zoom videoconference. To attend classes, you'll need a phone, tablet or computer and access to the internet. You can participate in the class from wherever you'd like, whether on your living room couch or in your office. Before your class meets, you'll receive an email from The Writing Salon with more information about Zoom and your remote class. If you have any questions about remote learning, please don't hesitate to reach out to us at hello@writingsalons.com.



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  1. Live Zoom Meeting: Thursday, August 12, 6:30pm-9:00pm
  2. Live Zoom Meeting: Thursday, August 19, 6:30pm-9:00pm
  3. Live Zoom Meeting: Thursday, August 26, 6:30pm-9:00pm
  4. Live Zoom Meeting: Thursday, September 02, 6:30pm-9:00pm
  5. Live Zoom Meeting: Thursday, September 09, 6:30pm-9:00pm
  • I felt Andy was one of the most approachable writing teachers I've ever had, not pretentious at all, and that helped set the tone for the class. I felt like all the participants were inspired and treated each person with respect when doing workshopping. Andy gave each person's writing equal attention and interest.



Friday, August 13, 2021 @ 1:30 am PDT
Friday, September 10, 2021 @ 4:00 am PDT
Event Category:


Online (SF Zoom)
Live Remote Meetings, ZOOM
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Cancellation Policy

10 days or more before the start date for a class, the registrant will receive a credit minus a 10% fee OR a refund minus a 20% fee.

3-9 days before the start date for a class, the registrant will receive a credit minus a 20% fee OR a refund minus a 30% fee.

2 days or less before the start date for a class, the registrant will not receive a credit or a refund.

The Writing Salon cannot offer refunds, credits, or makeup sessions for classes a student might miss.

In the event of an emergency, we may consider a refund or credit, whether partial or full. We review these requests on a case-by-case basis, and we ask that you notify us as near as possible to the start date for the class.

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